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Author Notes:

lirvilas 12th Jul 2020, 9:02 PM edit delete
lirvilas
Uh, I guess I lied, I guess I'm putting up full pages.

Here's some more Jen! (NSFW vote incentive)

Comments:

Phoenix In Crisis 12th Jul 2020, 9:11 PM edit delete reply
Phoenix In Crisis
Someone might wanna point out to that guy that he, too, is STILL in this 'shithole town'.

Sweet vote incentive.
(Did Tha Dogg really say that?!)
lirvilas 12th Jul 2020, 9:37 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
1) yup!

2) lord no, I'm being dumb
jamie59 12th Jul 2020, 9:20 PM edit delete reply
jamie59
Was that last speech bubble placement intentional or accidental?
lirvilas 12th Jul 2020, 10:19 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
those two bubbles are just hanging out there, aren't they?

also, the word balloons are ungraciously placed, unlike Jen's shapely bits
Marcel 13th Jul 2020, 1:46 PM edit delete reply
Marcel
I used to call them word balloons but folks here call them speech bubbles. Is one correct and the other not?
lirvilas 13th Jul 2020, 3:19 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Lirv's talking about Jen's shapely butt

ah, I dunno what you call 'em but I remain displeased with their placement on this page's fourth panel... when I figure out a better composition I'm moving them.
BUMBLEBEE 13th Jul 2020, 11:21 PM edit delete reply
BUMBLEBEE
Wait, I’m not tracking - what’s wrong with the speech bubble-balloons placement in 4?
lirvilas 13th Jul 2020, 11:30 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
I don't like 'em, but I can't put my finger on why.

I think that tail connecting them doesn't help. Maybe I need to shift both to italics and delete the tail. Or maybe I need to move 'em.

Thoughts?
BUMBLEBEE 14th Jul 2020, 8:53 PM edit delete reply
BUMBLEBEE
Well if you turn the page sideways, the rest of the balloons are arranged in a sort of sine wave, but the last balloon breaks the pattern. Maybe you’d like it more if it was up and to the right a bit, to finish the pattern. That’s the only thing I can think of that might be bothering your subconscious- they look fine to me. OCD?
Microraptor 12th Jul 2020, 9:32 PM edit delete reply
Microraptor
Jane may have managed to get out of Anvil Flats, but where did she get herself into...?

Well, into a super expensive bikini, for starters.
lirvilas 12th Jul 2020, 11:14 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
these next few pages should drop some breadcrumbs on Donna and Jane's common past
Microraptor 13th Jul 2020, 12:56 PM edit delete reply
Microraptor
Ah wonderful, I am looking forward to that! :-D
NeilKapit 12th Jul 2020, 10:14 PM edit delete reply
NeilKapit
Not exactly introducing himself with grace and tact, is he
lirvilas 12th Jul 2020, 10:18 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
guess I have to make this guy a recurring character dammit

so people love to rip on cities and how they're impersonal and nobody knows anyone

well, small towns have the opposite drawbacks
sigpig 13th Jul 2020, 2:10 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
Jen's not paying attention to HER OWN MEMO about always wearing masks...

ps: That waste of a sperm load's next coffee just quadrupled in price...
lirvilas 13th Jul 2020, 3:17 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
1) It's Donna's memo.

1A) Turns out some guys *do* like looking at a pretty woman's face

1B) Tips, bro

2) In a scrapped script for this week, Donna advises of such price adjustments!
BlueDragon 22nd Jul 2020, 8:59 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Dude doesn't need to be so rude to Jen >:(