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lirvilas 19th Dec 2020, 3:01 PM edit delete
lirvilas
Testing out a new format for 2021.

(Don't get your hopes up!)
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Microraptor 19th Dec 2020, 3:11 PM edit delete reply
Microraptor
Donna Panks doesn't need no stinkin' bribe money when she can simply extort some money herself instead!
lirvilas 21st Dec 2020, 10:48 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Donna would've made a helluva mob girl, but she was born too far out in the countryside where she was raised by honest if simple folk who knew that stripping should be used for good, not evil
StLOrca 19th Dec 2020, 3:53 PM edit delete reply
StLOrca
Looks like Carol Anne's halfway there already.
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:48 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Carol Anne is a strange duck who I think that everyone (other characters and audience) will eventually end up hating.
sigpig 20th Dec 2020, 12:51 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
What, you mean when Tyler builds his nest egg big enough she'll empty it out and be gone the next day? I saw that cumming when she was introduced and askedtold Tyler to "whip it out"...
lirvilas 21st Dec 2020, 10:51 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
@sig: Carol Anne and Tyler have a complicated relationship, I think that money is not her highest priority, maybe it's something that comes with money... tbd
KidCthulhu 19th Dec 2020, 3:58 PM edit delete reply
KidCthulhu
Yeeeah, I don't think Carol Anne needs much convincing on this one...
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:49 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
anything to yank hubby's chain while he's away on business
KidCthulhu 20th Dec 2020, 12:21 PM edit delete reply
KidCthulhu
Suuuuure >_>
BlueDragon 19th Dec 2020, 4:32 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
The look of pure joy in Donna's eyes XD
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:50 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
"screwing with people" can take a variety of forms!
jamie59 19th Dec 2020, 5:28 PM edit delete reply
jamie59
It's hard to drive across town with a boner but maybe he can make himself the creamy filling to a lesbian sandwitch. Be sure to bring the bucks or you'll get kicked to the curb.
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:50 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
re: "bring the bucks"

ha ha ha you'll love next page
argylefox 19th Dec 2020, 5:34 PM edit delete reply
argylefox
What a threat...
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:51 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
yeah, it's more like "is that a promise, because I'll still pay you"
Phoenix In Crisis 19th Dec 2020, 6:34 PM edit delete reply
Phoenix In Crisis
hey, buddy, don't think she can't do it!
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:52 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
well, I hope I've made Donna's particular predilection pretty prominent!
sherbettcat 19th Dec 2020, 8:58 PM edit delete reply
sherbettcat
Its not a threat, when you've got the goods to back it up!
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:53 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
nah, Donna and Carol Anne won't ever be lovers, they have too much fun as frenemies
Guest 19th Dec 2020, 9:25 PM edit delete reply
Who’s turning who?
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:53 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
a pertinent question
SchipLover 19th Dec 2020, 11:01 PM edit delete reply
SchipLover
I really like the layout. Tyler's third balloon could be more to the right like the first two.

@sherbettcat ...... That's called a promise.
lirvilas 20th Dec 2020, 10:58 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Yeah, let's talk about bubble placement! I would've moved that third Tyler balloon to the right, however that final comment from Carol Anne threatened to pull the eye away from Donna's words if those two were too close. Also, overlapping it gives the impression (at least to me) that Donna's talking over Tyler.

Maybe I'm getting defensive here, but I appreciate your feedback, I doubt many other comics artists (at the amateur level) give 1/100th as much attention to bubble placement.
sigpig 20th Dec 2020, 12:56 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
Not that you need anyone to fight your battles, but that's the exact way I read this page.
Also, Donna's new Step-mother would probably be the better instrument for Donna to use for Carol-Anne's "conversion therapy"...

Does Carol-Anne use Donna's tactics when being arrested?
Meander 20th Dec 2020, 10:11 AM edit delete reply
Meander
Look like Carol Anne is ready to GO!
lirvilas 21st Dec 2020, 10:46 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
by the five kids she's had, I would say there's ample evidence of that
Ariane Eldar 20th Dec 2020, 4:40 PM edit delete reply
Ariane Eldar
I think Donna earned enough to support me a little-little.
lirvilas 21st Dec 2020, 10:46 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
TBH I think Donna's going to give a bunch of that money to the Church.
Ariane Eldar 22nd Dec 2020, 4:02 AM edit delete reply
Ariane Eldar
Pffffft, I wonder what church?!