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Check out my crossover comic!

Author Notes:

lirvilas 2nd Mar 2020, 1:01 PM edit delete
lirvilas
Launching this one a little early too... just like your workplace, I can make three days stretch into four.

For your unnecessary enlightenment: Donna's original design had a bunch of bad tattoos.
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mightguy15 2nd Mar 2020, 1:23 PM edit delete reply
mightguy15
Clever girl
lirvilas 2nd Mar 2020, 1:39 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Tomorrow: when life gives you a bonfire...
Microraptor 2nd Mar 2020, 2:24 PM edit delete reply
Microraptor
And please remember the office's dress code, Donna.
Like e.g. when you show up there, you are supposed... to wear clothes.
lirvilas 2nd Mar 2020, 8:54 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
about that office

o_O
sigpig 2nd Mar 2020, 4:00 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
For a bit there, I couldn't figure out -exactly- what was vibrating in that first panel...
lirvilas 2nd Mar 2020, 8:55 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
you meant the second panel
...(RockB) 31st Mar 2020, 10:17 AM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
2nd panel is easy. Only one BZZZZZer.
On the other hand, why leave a vibrating slip on when it's off...
jamie59 2nd Mar 2020, 4:09 PM edit delete reply
jamie59
Donna at least you got the toys out before you passed out.
lirvilas 2nd Mar 2020, 8:58 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
...as opposed to the multiple bottles of pinot noir still sloshing around her liver
StLOrca 2nd Mar 2020, 8:51 PM edit delete reply
StLOrca
I love the way you write dialogue.
lirvilas 2nd Mar 2020, 9:05 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Thanks!

Some of these pages are five minutes, some of them take well over an hour in aggregate to write. I don't think many of my peers revisit their dialogue once they put it on the page... updating at this slow pace gives me at least a couple chances to tweak it, and add some extra spice.

Glad you like it!
Mrremoraman 4th Mar 2020, 6:35 AM edit delete reply
Mrremoraman
Holy CRAP that is the best bachelorette pad I've ever seen!
lirvilas 4th Mar 2020, 9:12 AM edit delete reply
lirvilas
She could do with cleaning it up.

At least the carpet is soft.
sigpig 4th Mar 2020, 3:14 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
"At least the carpet is soft."


Soft, and easy on the tongue when getting the "munchies"...
lirvilas 4th Mar 2020, 3:38 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Walked into that one, didn’t I?!
sigpig 5th Mar 2020, 10:43 AM edit delete reply
sigpig
That's what she said...
BlueDragon 8th Mar 2020, 5:42 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Damn, that must have been a one hell of a binger! XD
lirvilas 8th Mar 2020, 6:26 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Or... a Tuesday night?