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Author Notes:

lirvilas 22nd Mar 2020, 4:01 PM edit delete
lirvilas
OK, let's try that one again. Previous edition of this comic deleted due to technical errors.

Microraptor, apologies for deleting your comment. It is noted.

Lemme ask the question: are my one-off comics ("Short Shots") distracting?

Comments:

Phoenix In Crisis 22nd Mar 2020, 4:07 PM edit delete reply
Phoenix In Crisis
I dunno.
I find them to be entertaining, for the most part, but, I think they might serve better as chapter bookends or official intermissions over showing up sporadically in the course of the storyline. Kinda interrupts the flow.
lirvilas 23rd Mar 2020, 9:17 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
I appreciate the input.

I... may have some exceptionally lewd punchlines to run past you shortly.
Mrremoraman 23rd Mar 2020, 9:20 AM edit delete reply
Mrremoraman
Well, I guess Donna is a chip off the old block, then.
lirvilas 23rd Mar 2020, 9:18 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
There's no Dad Jokes like CREEPY Dad Jokes.

(Trying desperately to avoid dropping political heat here...)
Slaviiik 23rd Mar 2020, 11:17 AM edit delete reply
Slaviiik
I like them! Adds to the world in my opinion, plus they're funny. I'd agree with Phoenix up there that they might work better as chapter-ends or intermissions, though.
lirvilas 23rd Mar 2020, 9:18 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
I think I need to suck it up and do a fourth full-size page each week.
sigpig 23rd Mar 2020, 2:14 PM edit delete reply
sigpig
Moneybags, Funbags, or both?
Or did Moneybags procure Funbags?
Or did Funbags produce Moneybags?
Chicken or egg?
lirvilas 23rd Mar 2020, 9:20 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
At some totally inappropriate time in the future there'll be a really fucked up explanation for Donna's... assets.
BUMBLEBEE 25th Mar 2020, 8:09 PM edit delete reply
BUMBLEBEE
I like the plot driven stuff best. That said, I think there are some subtle indicators that Donna here is a villain!
lirvilas 26th Mar 2020, 1:52 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
Using Star Wars terminology, Donna at this point is probably equivalent to a TIE interceptor driver. A bad guy, sure, but so low on the totem pole that nobody cares aside from the A-Wing pilot with dialogue who gets smoked by them.

This is Maerc Corporation. Of course, all things change.
BlueDragon 30th Mar 2020, 4:52 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Her dad...reminds me a touch of Bob Barker XD
lirvilas 30th Mar 2020, 6:52 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
COME ON DOWN

YOU'RE THE NEXT CONTESTANT ON THE PRICE IS RIGHT

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