you’re picking up on the important parts... It’s fun re-introducing characters that I spent a lot of time on. Definitely show them in a different light!
Pffft, pathetic-pathetic, wafer-licker. "Choose your words carefully". I wouldn't even give you a weak-weak smile for that, spank me. I bet even psycho-ginger wont be impressed. I would rather say something like "Say, is that green rag around your crotch supposed to be a skirt, or is it a lime ring to keep the ants out of your face?"
I don't THINK Donna can copulate her way out of THIS mess...
Way to disarm and bamboozle MJ.
MJ knows what kind of man Chuck WAS; apparently he's grown up in the past year or so. The next words out of Donna's mouth should be to the effect of "He turned me down twice at a strip club by telling me he's VERY happily married. If that doesn't scream "faithful", I don't know what does!"
But we ALL know Donna won't say that. Her default defence mechanism is to attack...
...I would skip town!
"Minging slag", indeed! I almost blushed!
(Forgive me, I never saw MJ before her death-glare a few pages back)
Way to disarm and bamboozle MJ.
MJ knows what kind of man Chuck WAS; apparently he's grown up in the past year or so. The next words out of Donna's mouth should be to the effect of "He turned me down twice at a strip club by telling me he's VERY happily married. If that doesn't scream "faithful", I don't know what does!"
But we ALL know Donna won't say that. Her default defence mechanism is to attack...
Counterpoint: why did he allow himself to be in that situation?!
Dammit Lirv! I'm dying over here XD