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lirvilas 7th Aug 2021, 11:01 PM edit delete
lirvilas
what's that creative writing error where your irl mood shows up in your writing?

uh, yeah

hope your saturday night is going better than Donna's!

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Thanks man! Gotta catch up on a couple more, I've been slackin'!
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Octopus Ink 7th Aug 2021, 11:07 PM edit delete reply
Octopus Ink
You call it a writing error.
I call it "Catharsis".
Either way, I find that it gives the work a bit more resonance.
Donna's lucky she has the type of playmates who'll straight-up kidnap her from a public place for her own good.
I wish I still had friends like that!
lirvilas 7th Aug 2021, 11:33 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
not to drop any sort of spoiler but your observations about Donna's associates is dead on

also I'd be a bit leery of hanging with any crowd that goes to the bars with them black-head-bags (there's gotta be a technical term for those)
sigpig 8th Aug 2021, 10:56 AM edit delete reply
sigpig
Gimp masksSandbags.
You're just not going to the correct bars, then... lol
jamie59 7th Aug 2021, 11:10 PM edit delete reply
jamie59
What is she like a horse? Put blinders on & she'll calm down.
lirvilas 7th Aug 2021, 11:30 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
"ride her hard and put her away wet"
Microraptor 8th Aug 2021, 7:39 AM edit delete reply
Microraptor
She is in a fancy restaurant!
(Did I just guess right, or did you take my comment as a suggestion??)

Also, I first misread the first speech bubble as "Holy slut!"
(Wouldn't that rather be MJ Stonecastle? ;-) )
lirvilas 8th Aug 2021, 11:19 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
yeah, I took your comment and ran with it

"The King's Coin" is the only other restaurant that I've shown so far, and it definitely has a bar, so a new venue was called for.
SchipLover 8th Aug 2021, 8:02 AM edit delete reply
SchipLover
this is what happens when the MIB get involved.....abduction and possibly probes (not that Donna would complain). And where did Anya disappear to?
sigpig 8th Aug 2021, 10:57 AM edit delete reply
sigpig
Considering Anya's ACTUAL employer, she was the probably the one who called them in...
sigpig 8th Aug 2021, 10:58 AM edit delete reply
sigpig
You gotta admire a chick who's straight-up rage-mode involves the immediate loss of clothing...
lirvilas 8th Aug 2021, 11:23 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
fighting celtic style!
Faiya 8th Aug 2021, 7:16 PM edit delete reply
I was guessing it would turn out she's at an Olive Garden. Happy to see I wasn't too far off. Dinner and a show!
lirvilas 8th Aug 2021, 11:24 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
all the breadsticks you can eat

and all the chairs you can break
BlueDragon 4th Sep 2021, 3:04 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Well, Donna's reached her breaking point.

Mayhaps, after she comes out of this, she should...seek some professional help? If she's not too proud D:
lirvilas 4th Sep 2021, 10:52 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
anybody who writes a character who *isn't* a candidate for therapy needs to reassess their characters