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lirvilas 5th Dec 2021, 10:30 PM edit delete
lirvilas
oh that's right, General Mbuni doesn't take "no" for an answer
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Octopus Ink 5th Dec 2021, 10:41 PM edit delete reply
Octopus Ink
Run Donna, RUN!!
lirvilas 5th Dec 2021, 10:43 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
YOU try pulling off a sprint in 4" heels!
Octopus Ink 6th Dec 2021, 10:11 AM edit delete reply
Octopus Ink
I've seen it done.
You'd think that as much time that she spends in heels, (and nothing else) Donna would know how!
KidCthulhu 6th Dec 2021, 9:02 AM edit delete reply
KidCthulhu
That one panel looks more like a reticle than a wedding ring. Great composition!
Microraptor 6th Dec 2021, 10:39 AM edit delete reply
Microraptor
Though with the gem on top, kinda also looks like a crown.
Double symbolism!
lirvilas 6th Dec 2021, 10:26 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
funny that y'all saw those things!

sometimes you just wanna break up the page composition
Ariane Eldar 6th Dec 2021, 10:36 AM edit delete reply
Ariane Eldar
Pffffft, exceptional situations require exceptional solutions!
"A terrible-terrible acident has happened! I told my general he shouldn't use that electric hairdryer in the splish-splash bathtub. Boohoohoo. I'll keep the ring as memento."
Pffft, that's what to do, Donna. You can thank me later.
lirvilas 6th Dec 2021, 10:28 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
The General's goons definitely like their 'lectrocutin with appliances

Donna, not so much. Hers tend to be rated to handle... damp environments
Microraptor 6th Dec 2021, 10:48 AM edit delete reply
Microraptor
"Look Donna, everything the light touches... is our kingdom!" :-D
BTW, Mufasa's voice (which is non other than James Earl "Darth Vader" Jones!), would be a pretty good fit for how I imagine Mbuni sounds!

I have to agree with Octopus Ink though: Donna should seize that little window of opportunity and GTFO!!
It's a blessing that she approached the Koganans first, which means that they - as least for now - don't know where she lives!
(Living working in a tiny coffee shack in some backwater town is better than any witness protection program!)
lirvilas 6th Dec 2021, 10:28 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
compelling characters attract epic enemies, but also superb allies

there will be some good that comes out of this adventure
BUMBLEBEE 6th Dec 2021, 8:59 PM edit delete reply
BUMBLEBEE
She knows all she needs to know about this dude from the last panel…
lirvilas 6th Dec 2021, 10:30 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
so yeah, I'm writing some of these previous pages and I'm like "let's make that motherfucker sympathetic, let's make Donna fall in love with him" and then I sober up and I'm like "daaaaaamn General Mbuni has *killed* people, no way is he blowing off a rejection in a mature and non-violent manner"

No matter what Donna says two weeks or two years from now, Mbuni is a bad guy.
BlueDragon 5th Apr 2022, 8:41 PM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
I love that framing with the ring. Er, encircling. It's very accurate in the caging of her (you'd think he'd get the idea, but nope. Can only think in terms of self).
lirvilas 5th Apr 2022, 10:41 PM edit delete reply
lirvilas
man, I'm just trying to break up the panels so they're not all head-and-shoulders shots
BlueDragon 6th Apr 2022, 11:59 AM edit delete reply
BlueDragon
Well, it works!