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lirvilas 15th Dec 2021, 10:20 PM edit delete
Grinder$: Trouble is Brewing will be concluding shortly!

It has been a lot of fun!
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Jean_Q_Citizen 15th Dec 2021, 10:34 PM edit delete reply
Looks like Donna may also be concluding shortly. If so, she was also a lot of fun...just ask a looooong list of sex partners.
lirvilas 16th Dec 2021, 1:01 PM edit delete reply
In the Lirverse, characters have outstanding plot armor… until they don’t!
Spelledeg 15th Dec 2021, 10:35 PM edit delete reply
Ohhhh ohhh boy, that's one hell of a way to end a 'workation'
lirvilas 16th Dec 2021, 1:01 PM edit delete reply
Nothing is more restful than a dirt nap
TheMario360 15th Dec 2021, 11:36 PM edit delete reply
uh oh. somebody's about to get shot
lirvilas 16th Dec 2021, 1:01 PM edit delete reply
Yes, I am very pro vaccine

Oh wait that’s not what you meant nm
Rulerbrain 15th Dec 2021, 11:42 PM edit delete reply
Trouble has brewed

roll credits
lirvilas 16th Dec 2021, 1:02 PM edit delete reply
Yeah I gotta hammer out my usual credits page.

Lirvilas is Unreliable narrator +3
Octopus Ink 16th Dec 2021, 12:26 AM edit delete reply
Octopus Ink
Well, DAMN.
Here's hoping that when the soldier steps up to do his inevitable "I'm just following orders, but, I'm STILL gonna enjoy this 'cause me & my BIG GUN are overcompensating for stuff" speech, Donna can still talk her way (or employ OTHER methods to get herself) out of this!
I didn't think she was gonna get a "happily ever after", but I don't think I can bear her going out like THIS!
KidCthulhu 16th Dec 2021, 5:49 AM edit delete reply
Don't forget the cast includes a necromancer with an anal fixation Maggie Ashton.
Andrew_C 16th Dec 2021, 8:27 AM edit delete reply
I was going to write that the body will be in France Monaco, but if anyone knows how to smuggle a corpse it's her.
lirvilas 16th Dec 2021, 1:24 PM edit delete reply
That’ll be up to Prof to continue, Dr. Ashton is his character

Sorry guys I got bored and busy. I’m shifting to a yaoi Star Wars parody made with models and clip art. But seriously, buckle up, this ain’t over.
KidCthulhu 16th Dec 2021, 1:54 PM edit delete reply
Whoa, wait... you're serious about ending Grinder$?
Microraptor 16th Dec 2021, 10:43 AM edit delete reply
BTW, the last time she was at this place, she nearly got eaten by a kraken.

I mean, that's a pattern.

The lesson is clear:
If you want to live a long live, stay the fuck out of Monaco, Donna!!
lirvilas 16th Dec 2021, 1:03 PM edit delete reply
Which reminds me, I need to rename this chapter to “French Press”
nunya 16th Dec 2021, 11:49 AM edit delete reply
The part of this story arc that I haven't understood is, unless the General is some sort of bought and paid for US stooge, why would Donna being a Russian asset be so bad that she needs to get immediately offed for it? Couldn't the General use her for information for his personal gain? At the very least, why wouldn't he want to capture her for interrogation? Admittedly, there are probably sexual tortures that wouldn't be as persuasive with Donna as with other, more strait-laced women, but there are other nerve endings to fry to get [unreliable] information. Besides, watching her flop like a fish after getting tazed should be a lot more entertaining than watching her bleed.
lirvilas 16th Dec 2021, 11:55 AM edit delete reply
Hell hath no fury like a Dictator spurned!

He doesn’t give a damn if she’s a spy… and it looks bad in front of the troops to be less than decisive.
sherbettcat 16th Dec 2021, 6:19 PM edit delete reply
What she really needs is a distraction.
Ladies and gentleman, Mr. Conway Twitty!
Oh right, he's dead.
BlueDragon 5th Apr 2022, 8:49 PM edit delete reply