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lirvilas 2nd Jul 2022, 5:01 PM edit delete
Yes I'm on break.

Chloe is Jaycee's character.

Check out this gift art from the super talented Spelledeg--her hard-luck mobster Simeon and our favorite Donna getting it on!


Thanks, Spellz!
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spacekrispies 2nd Jul 2022, 5:09 PM edit delete reply
Well that is a rather interesting (and much cleaner than expected) turn of events! I can’t wait to see how she makes bacon!
lirvilas 2nd Jul 2022, 5:10 PM edit delete reply
Chloe brings home the bacon as a MARSEC contractor... no way in hell is she putting in any (more) time in the service industry.
jamie59 2nd Jul 2022, 5:11 PM edit delete reply
No but she's heard of Patent Leather.
lirvilas 2nd Jul 2022, 8:11 PM edit delete reply
Jaycee Storm 2nd Jul 2022, 5:29 PM edit delete reply
Jaycee Storm
Imagine if Chloe pitched that product on Shark Tank. They would LOSE. THEIR. SHIT.
Spellodello 3rd Jul 2022, 8:20 AM edit delete reply
That would be an interesting multiverse visitif they didn't visit the normal earth kind!
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 10:26 AM edit delete reply
This is one of those inventions that 1) is a lot more useful in a commercial setting 2) has probably been superseded by ironclad process controls in real quick serve restaurants

However I could see this getting sold a couple decades ago on a half hour long infomercial
sigpig 2nd Jul 2022, 5:31 PM edit delete reply
Re: fanart.

Simeon, what do you think Helen say about this?
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 10:27 AM edit delete reply
I think Spellz likes to torture the shit out of her characters, and physical pain is only one vector
Spellodello 4th Jul 2022, 11:03 AM edit delete reply
Sir I did not check this comment section to be attacked on a Monday afternoon this way
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 11:08 AM edit delete reply
as opposed to the usual way you get attacked on a Monday afternoon?
Spellodello 4th Jul 2022, 12:00 PM edit delete reply
sherbettcat 2nd Jul 2022, 5:37 PM edit delete reply
Oh pshaw! fried eggs are EASY!
Narrator: One grease fire later...
I renounce fried eggs!
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 10:28 AM edit delete reply
Man you’d have to be working at it to light up your stove with grease when you’re working on eggs

But I’m sure it’s been done plenty of times
sherbettcat 4th Jul 2022, 10:30 AM edit delete reply
I've been known to have the luck of Mr. Bean.
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 10:35 AM edit delete reply
Oh that suuuuuuucks

Here’s my formula:
-lightly greased small cast iron pan at medium-high heat
-glass lid that can trap steam
-watch until the egg yolk starts changing color
jellyfishin 2nd Jul 2022, 6:21 PM edit delete reply
Hopefully Donna isn't so bedazzled by Chloe's perfect fried egg-making invention that she forgets to ask what part of the sink got destroyed in the process.
nunya 3rd Jul 2022, 7:54 AM edit delete reply
I've played with a few low tech vacuum systems over the years - mostly for filtering things in labs - and suspect there was no major destruction. More likely she added a 'T' connection with a valve. Open the valve with the water on and a vac gets pulled on the line leading to the bell end of the contraption. When you want to break the vacuum pull, you close the valve, turn off the water, and reintroduce air to the system with the pull valve/handle located on the bell end.

Also, if you have a good system that doesn't leak, you only have to run the water for a minute or two. If you get the level of vacuum you need, closing off the valve at the 'T' will get you a static pull at the other end so you don't have to dump hundreds of gallons of water to constantly renew the vacuum.
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 10:29 AM edit delete reply

Yes yes, that is exactly what I was going to say in response to jellyfishin

(but for real, thanks for the insight)
Microraptor 2nd Jul 2022, 7:48 PM edit delete reply
Okay... Don't know yet how exactly I'll play it out, but I think the author notes in my current chapter's epilogue will inevitably have a link back to this page...

(Gus, Drake or Koganan stuff is one thing - but I never would have thought of fried eggs to be the source of potential continuity headaches I would have to circumnavigate in my writing...)
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 10:29 AM edit delete reply
With Stilldown always lurking in the wings, I have that same continuity concern about vehicles
Stever 3rd Jul 2022, 10:12 AM edit delete reply
It may be no coincidence that her invention looks like a boob :D
lirvilas 4th Jul 2022, 10:31 AM edit delete reply
Dr. Ashton (the usual inventor in these pages, who is intentionally absent from these recent chapters) would have *definitely* attached it to a body part